Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Love Song For Kids

I have been doing creative writing for so long now. I have been writing Songs, Poems, Shot Stories, Letters, Notes, Journal Entries since 5th grade. I think it is just such a great way to express myself. I think it is cool that I am able to go back and look and things I wrote, see what I was going through, I am even able to see my writing improve. I was looking through some old note books and one the first page of my oldest Composition note book I cam across the first song I ever wrote. It is called "Mo' Money" lol and I think I was trying to be a gangster rapper, the song is just so bad! ha ha ha I am not even gonna include any lyrics besides "Mo Money, Mo Money That's What I Want." Ha ha.

I would have to say that there is a tie for which is my favorite song that I have written. It is between "Catch Me While I Am Falling" and "Kaleidoscope."

Catch Me When I Am Falling
Written By: Janetbouncer
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You say you'll be there,/When I'm scarred by fate,/Will you be there when I fall?/To catch me before it's too late./How can I trust your word?/How can I trust anyone?/How can I turn back time?/ When the hurt has already been done./I’m still staring at the wall/Pretending my life is better/But when the lights are off/I’m always killing me/I know I say people don’t care/Well I still am not sure if they do/But people always say/They will be there for me/How do I know they will be there/How do I know that their right/How do I
know that it will be okay/How do I know it will ever end/Will you be the one to save me/When I’m drowning/Will you be the one to stop me/From all of my pain/You wont be ashamed/To see me crawl/Will you, will you/Will you catch me when I am falling/I lay down on my bed room floor/Pills always at hand/Scissors always there to ease the pain/But I stop myself again/So I stair there when I’m sitting/Anything to heal my head/There is really no use for me/Except the fact of abusing me/How do I know they will be there/How do I know that their right/How do I know that it will be okay/How do I know it will ever end/Will you be the one to save me/When I’m hurt/Will you be the one to stop me/From everything/You wont be ashamed/When I fall/I hope you, I hope you/I hope you catch me when I am falling/I Know it seems it is easy/Easy for me to live/But when you live a life full of lies/It leaves you feeling lost/I continue staring at the wall/Watching as I repeatedly fall/But I know my loneliness/Always gets the best of me/Will you be the one to save me/If ever do it again/Will you be the one to stop me/Before I do die/You wont be ashamed/To see me crawl/I want you, I want you/I want you to catch me when I am falling/Will you/Will you catch me when I am falling/I hope you/I hope you catch me when I am falling/I want you to/I want you to catch me when I am falling/Promise you will, Promise you will/Promise you will catch me when I am falling/Promise you wont be ashamed/To see me bawl/But will you ever, ever/Ever catch me when I am falling.

Kaleidoscope
Written By: Janetbouncer
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Things seemed to be going well/But what can I say/Ignorance is always gray (always gray)/Was this love what we thought/All games, never fought/I guess I was just dreaming (just dreaming)/And I'm sorry-/For treating you this way/Our l
ove just seemed to go away (go away)/And you're sorry-/For falling in love/Broken heart is what it was (what it was)/Things looked better-/Through the Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope)/I know it's hard to believe/Cause we barely spoke/Love is just hard-/Harder than we thought (than we thought)/Things can only get better-/Through the Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope) /Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope) /Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope) /Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope)/ Get better/I know what you're thinking/Thinking I'm crazy/But my dignity is what I need (what I need)/We tried to work it out/But we were full of doubt/There is just no more use (no more use)/And I'm sorry-/For treating you this way/Our love just seemed to go away (go away)/And you're sorry-/For falling in love/Broken heart is what it was (what it was)/Things looked better-/Through the Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope)/I know it's hard to believe/Cause we barely spoke/Love is just hard-/Harder than we thought (than we thought)/Things can only get better-/Through the Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope)/Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope)Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope)/Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope)Get better/What was that line in that one song?/When you told me we would be together (forever)/I said I would do whatever it took to be with you/But nothing last forever (everything ends)/But once again it looks better/And once again we look better/In the Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope, kaleidoscope)/Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope, kaleidoscope)/Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope, kaleidoscope)/Our Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope, kaleidoscope)/Things looked better-/Through the Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope)/I know it's hard to believe/Cause we barely spoke/Love is just hard-/Harder than we thought (than we thought)/Things can only get better-/Through the Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope)/Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope)/Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope)/Kaleidoscope (kaleidoscope) (kaleidoscope)/Things looked better (things get better)/Love is just hard (way to hard)/Maybe we aren't meant be (I guess were not)/Together as one/Kaleidoscope.

UPDATE: LOL I Had NO Idea "Catch Me When i Am Falling" Was So Emo, I Don't Think I Have Read The Lyrics Since like 9th Grade.

Thanks 4 reading what I have to say.
MYM Janetbouncer

1 comment:

ngassa said...

i like your blog
so cool to name each post with a janet song
you are writing songs and poems that s cool.
im going to read yours soon
and give you my FEEDBACK
i m in a rush right now
take care
ngassa